I'm not a fan of slash (not that I hate it, I do enjoy the occasional Harry/Draco slash in fanfiction) but this was definitely readable.

One confusion I had was with point of view when it came to using the term the other. I was unable to tell who it was reffering to, but perhaps thats the point? Being unsure of where one ends and another begins?

?That wasn't what I had expected, but good notheless.:)

Wow...definately not what I was expecting?

And despite its graphic nature...it works well.

You built the desire...and then managed to let it go slowly but surely.

Well done.

that was good =) you should do a sequel, and say if they stay together or not
~mia

WOOHOO. I AM THAT FRIEND!LOVELOVELOVELOVE.
lol.
lovelovelove.
i like it.