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Vost Thenen 2008-05-20 . chapter 1
Some little bits of mysterious insiders information that I don't think we'll ever know. It's a lover's poem, certainly, but not cheesy, and never complacent in its language as is the plague of many a love poem. Here is a love to work for and keep. Very well written, I especially love 'your fingers on strings,' good image.
addicted2storiz 2008-02-21 . chapter 1
Well I did just try logging in and it wouldn't let me... again :(
I've tried several times and I shall again, but I'm seriously contemplating creating another account and uploading some stuff (my only fear being that about half of it would be rather dark and perhaps not what I want to known for though I do like them myself... dilemmas dilemmas). As soon as I do, you'll be the first to know (y'know unless you don't want to know... :D )

Um...I love writing haikus though I haven't written one in a while. I would have to say my favorite and the most meaningful one to me was the third one. I love the abstract concept and honestly, there was a time when I was tad bit too obsessed with the ingenuity and power behind words (and/or the lack of/ combination of them).

And I sincerely enjoyed talking to you too ;D
Leaves of Labefaction 2007-12-02 . chapter 1
Awesome. I like the part 'My mind floods with candle smoke,' !!
An Apple Bleeds At Twilight 2007-08-28 . chapter 1
Very pretty. I ESPECIALLY love this stanza:

"In the presence of
Strange words and no words at all,
We will understand."

I just love the way it explains so much and yet so little at the same time. I loved this poem.

- Notebook
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