Reviews for Happy Family
Basara 5/29/07 . chapter 1
everyone has their family problems... it doesn't matter if that family lives in luxury or thrash...

nice...
The Angel in Black 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Very well done! I like how you built it up with that one single sentence, only to crush the happy picture with the last line. I like.
Ashelin 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Wow, this happy family image is soon crushed by the last line. Beautiful (in a sad way). Great job as always.
a silenced revolution 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Aw, I'm sorry, I hope things get better with your family.

Nice haiku.