almost all humnanity are finding that 'something' within themselves...

nice...

I think you should get rid of the author's note. It takes away from the poem.

Okay, I'm going to have to say it again: I can relate. I can relate to a terrible extent.

Nice work, anyway.

It's so hard to find what we truly need sometimes, and when we do it is often right in front of us. Great job.