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| HFGLF 2008-07-23 ch 43, anon. | abuseWow, after all of that time, I finally caught up with your updates! I didn't ever think that I'd do that. *hints* Weren't you supposed to update this week? *nudge nudge* I really loved this arc and I hope your next one will be equally exciting! You've definitely improved! |
| HFGLF 2008-07-23 ch 42, anon. | abuseThis is, by far my favorite arc. I love how you've composed it and each chapter leaves me wanting more. I feel bad for Ko and Zangetsu and I hope she'll be saved. I really don't want her to die. |
| HFGLF 2008-07-23 ch 41, anon. | abuseThis chapter was action-packed and very gripping! It had me at the edge of my seat the whole time! It was very powerful and the water scene was magnificent! I hope everyone will be alright! Poor Fife and Keiji! |
| HFGLF 2008-07-23 ch 40, anon. | abuseAnother Arc, how interesting this one seems to be. I wonder what Zangetsu has up his sleeve for our anti-heroes...I look forward to his fight with Undine. |
| HFGLF 2008-07-23 ch 39, anon. | abuseA prostitute?! Why Mel-sama? Why!?! It's so unfair! *cries* Ah well, it does make sense on a lot of his situations. Also, I don't think Hiroshima was being a jerk, they judged him harshly when he was in the group at first but when Fife comes out with a reason for his actions then they treat him with acceptance. I kind of feel sorry for poor ol' Hiro-kun. So, Flora's got another plan up her sleeve. I wonder what will happen now. Will she destroy the city of plants? |
| HFGLF 2008-07-23 ch 38, anon. | abuseFinally, I'm going to see some of Fife's past! I've got to read the next chapter in a hurry so that I can sink in all of what he is! *rushes to next chapter because she only has about 10 minutes left to read* |
| Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-07-15 ch 43, | abuseThis was a great chapter! I really like how you've put so much into these recent chapters without making it seemed rushed and having a well, evened-out course of events per chapter. The Chains of Hell attack was interesting. It makes me wonder about Hiroshima's potential and who he really is. I'm so curious about him! I'm still curious about Fife. It seems like there are unanswered questions about him that we still don't know. I also wonder about Zangetsu, Undine, Keiji and Ko. Hopefully we'll find out more about them as the story goes on. This story never gets boring! |
| Dark Angel Hiroshima 2008-07-14 ch 43, | abuseSo, Hiroshima and Serenande knew each other. It sounded like Serenande was actually one of the understanding people in his life. I like analyzing their relationship. I personally think Hiroshima was doing Serenade a favor by sending her to hell. I hope Soel pays for what she did to her. |
| Tragedy of Light and Dark 2008-07-14 ch 43, | abuseHIROSHIMA ROCKS! Well, another foe down with a tragic ending and now it's time for a little visit from Vespa and a nice explanation of Soel. I hope she'll explain the magical items of Zameln as well. I can't wait for your next chapter! Too bad it's only Monday...T_T |
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-07-14 ch 43, anon. | abuseThis was cool! *dances* Evil Serenande is DEAD! YAYNESS! I know, I should feel sorry for her but I don't. I don't agree with what she does to people's souls... |
| Dark Kurogane 2008-07-14 ch 43, anon. | abuseHiroshima is intelligent as ever to find a flux in the magical barrier. He can't do anything as long as he's inside of the barrier but once he can get out, then he's free to do as he wishes. I like his Chains of Hell attack and I have my theories about what kind of angel he is. I also like how Fife seems to tear down his facade about being a powerful being like an archangel or djinn of sorts. I think Hiroshima has ties with Lucifer. Only angels with that ability can drag people to hell. It seems like a task only Lucifer or God can do, well plus their disciples and things of that nature. Looks like the cast finally acquired a Zameln weapon aside from the Crimson Blade. I wonder why Vespa is trying to get them and what significance they have with your plot. I'm also interested in Soel. |
| Utena Himemiya 2008-07-14 ch 43, anon. | abuseWhat a tragic turn of events. I'm glad that Ko's alright. Azmy really got emotional in this chapter too. I was suprised that she was so forward with her emotions. She usually isn't like that but I can definitely see why you made her act like that. She's such an emotional train wreck but she's always managed to keep it hidden until now. Hiroshima kicked **, as usual. I expect nothing less from that angel. He's such an awesome character. I'm glad that we're finally going to see what Soel is all about in the next chapter. This will be interesting. |
| Utena Himemiya 2008-07-14 ch 42, anon. | abuseWow, what an action-packed chapter! Lol, and Hiroshima didn't even have to fight. Serenande is such an awesome villan. I think that she's my favorite actually. Poor Ko though. I hope she lives and I'm taking a liking to the KoZangetsu couple. I know, sad me for straying away from ChichiriKo. I don't see as much chemistry between them as I did in the Dark Bride Arc. Maybe they'll spark my interest again but as for now, I've moved on to KoZangetsu. They are too cute! |
| SilverIsamu 2008-07-14 ch 43, anon. | abuseHerm...That was really sad first off. Poor Serenande...T_T She wasn't really all that bad, just mean ol' Soel was possessing her. I wonder what Vespa will explain. I want to know about Soel too. |
| SilverIsamu 2008-07-14 ch 42, anon. | abuseThis was a good chapter. I hope that Ko doesn't die! I'm in suspense! I'm going to hurry and read the next chapter! *dashes off* |