This chapter was interesting. Kabuto seems really mysterious and creepy too. I want to know what's up with him.

Chichiri cracks me up. I think he's probably my favorite character so far. I wonder what Hiroshima wants everyone for.

This was full of action! I've got to say that Tsurugi is a real bastard for doing that! I hope that Fife will be alright. I like Ko's song in the beginning as well. I also like how Keiji is developing.

I like how cheerful Fife is. It's a good contrast to Undine, who seems stoic and reserved. I like how the other two forms are opposite as well. I have a feeling I'll like this story.

I'm glad that you decided to continue this story! It's probably my favorite of your works. This chapter adds to Ko's character and Fable's too. I also wonder what's so important about Azmy and what about Vespa and Soel's relationship? So many unanswered questions!

This was an interesting twist to Ko's character. I am guessing this is her arc. So I wonder if she'll confront the guy who raped her, or took advantage of her. I loved the fight with Fable as well. Something tells me this is going to get good.

I am still interested in what will go down with Azmy, and it seems that Fable is playing a more active role as well. Now the real mysteries have been brought to light as well as the fact that Soel has Undine captive for whatever reason. It'll be interesting to see what happens in your next installment..

I like how Tsurugi referenced Xanadu in this chapter. I really liked the chapters with Xanadu in them and I found that quest deep and psychological. So many questions being brought up. I hope that they get solved soon. It seems like everything is coming to an end. This story is just...so good. I'll wait for your next chapter.

Now we'll finally find out what Soel wanted Undine for. I am hoping anyway.

Nice action in this chapter! I really like Fable, she seems so cool and awesome. I want to see more of her character. I hope she's the next bad guy that they all have to face.

Poor Ko, I feel really bad for her. I am thinking this next arc is her past. This'll be interesting.

I need to read your stories on your other account! I think I'll go and do that after I finish reading this. Ceres is finally dead and Azmy is back. This is going to get interesting.

Great chapter! I really like the Fable has a more active role! I can't wait to see what happens next!

This story just keeps getting better. Azmy is back and now I wonder if she'll be a bad guy or not. Something tells me that she will.

Great chapter! I just now noticed that you started to update this again! Truly a wonderful story. I will definitely read more of this.