|Reviews for Sacrifice|
| Dark Kurogane 9/10/07 . chapter 14
“Okay, let’s have a bitchy one.” Hiroshima replied, glaring at Chichiri. “Blond fuck, get to work.” He commanded. “Quit being an ass.”
This was classic Hiroshima. It was probably the funniest line out of the whole thing!
Ko accidently hitting Hiroshima's ass was also greatness. You're right, this chapter was funny. Despite the genre change here, it definitely fit in with the rest of the story.
| Dark Kurogane 9/10/07 . chapter 13
Fable is an odd character, whimsical and mysterious. Though I'm not sure what to think of her. I liked Hiroshima in this chapter, and it shows that even though he's tough and rugged, he can be a kind person in his own way.
| Tragedy of Light and Dark 9/6/07 . chapter 13
This was a good chapter. Hiroshima is really coming out as a character. He's so cool!
| Utena Himemiya 9/6/07 . chapter 13
What a nice way to end this chapter. I liked the fight with the plants in the beginning.
Fable- What a weird character. She almost seems too innocent for being a wizard. I wonder if she's like Vespa...Or maybe she has something to do with Vespa's request.
Also the Keiji and Fife thing was funny, especially when Fife went to hug Hiroshima and he was all like "no" and Fife slumped over dramatically. He's such a dork.
At least we know Hiroshima's preferences. I always kind of thought that Fife was gay. Seems Keiji is really taken aliking to Azmy...Poor Fife.
Hiroshima was also particularly interesting in this chapter. I never knew he was a fatalist. I could have predicted Undine, but not Hiroshima. I also think Tsurugi is too.
Sorry for the long-ass reviews O_O
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 9/5/07 . chapter 13
I liked this chapter. Hiroshima was particularly interesting there. Oh and Keiji and Fife's moment cracked me up. I always knew Fife was gay.
I'm wondering about Fable though...She's hiding something.
| Natsuya 9/5/07 . chapter 13
10 Hits! Congratulations! Wow, your stories are so popular! What's your secret? Lol, oh, I already know. Your characters!
Well, onto the chapter: I liked this chapter a lot, not because of the FifexKeije action (to be honest, it annoys me how reluctant Keiji is! Makes Fife seem like a Sexual Predator, lol!), but Hiroshima. He is such an awesome character. Now, they'll have to deal with another legend, but I am wondering what it has to do with Vespa's assignment.
Well done! I love this story.
BTW, I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter...*grins*
| moonlit dynasty 9/5/07 . chapter 13
Hello! Sorry, I just didn't have the time to log-in since I'm itching to type a review before my thoughts go flying around again.
Fabled - nice name, nice description, nice character. Simply put, I like her.
Hiro x Tsurugi - very, very nice scene, though I find it too short? *grins evilly*
Fife x Keiji - EXCELLENT! 'nuff said *eyes twikling: I really love their tandem*
Oh, and I'm glad I've got to see Hiro's mellow side. I really want to know him better.
Hope you'll update soon! By the way, I've already updated. _
| Forever Stargazing 9/4/07 . chapter 13
Interesting. It's somewhat action and romance. Though I'm sure, this chapter has the most sexual content, than any other stories you've written (Not saying it's bad). Well Fable, seems interesting.
| SilverIsamu 9/4/07 . chapter 12
I hope Chichiri will be alright...
| SilverIsamu 9/4/07 . chapter 11
Hey, I think Vespa kicks ass! I'd like to know more about her and Soel for that matter. They aren't talked about much.
| SilverIsamu 9/4/07 . chapter 10
I liked this chapter!
| Dark Kurogane 9/4/07 . chapter 12
Wow, there's a lot of tension between the legend and everyone else. Also Keiji and Fife don't seem too friendly towards each other as well.
I wonder what will happen. Lol, Chichiri always seems to be getting the bad, isn't he?
| Denzel'sCRIMSON 9/2/07 . chapter 5
This was another great chap and quite eerie in some places. For example, the ghost and the picture with blood on it. I bet the ghost is a good ghost. Anyway, I like Amzy as a character, she really shy but very cute. However, she reminds me of Ritsu and Kisa from Fruits Basket rolled into one character (not that that's bad or anything.) Either way, there isn't much other to say then that you are a great writer with a great gift for story telling. I really hope you go far in this and I wish you the best in publishing your stories. Good luck and great story.
| Denzel'sCRIMSON 9/2/07 . chapter 4
Another great chapter! I'm really impressed with this. I hope that one day you get it published. You said that you were trying to get some of your stories into a manga. I was just wondering if you were drawing it yourself? If you are, I'd like to see some of the character concept pictures you have come up with. Anyway, on with the review. This chapter had barely any errors! Also, very nice execution. Sometimes when I read other chapters where they are talking amongst themselves and there is no action, some people lose their rhythm. That wasn't the case here. You did very well with it, hitting all the points that were important and necessary to the story. I can see that something is being to brew in the story and I bet it's going to be something really important. I can't wait! Keep up the good work and I'll start reading the next chapter now.
| Denzel'sCRIMSON 9/2/07 . chapter 3
Another good chapter! Very nice. I especially liked when Hiroshima stabbed Fife. I have a feeling that something is going to come out of that situation between him and Keiji. Anyway, there were still some errors (Like Muah? should be Moi? Since it's french; that is unless you wanted it that way), but it didn't disrupt the flow of the story at all. All the characters are original, I've noticed and I have to say that this whole story, from what little I've read, is great. Oh yeah, and I meant to put my favourite characters in this review since I read the chapter yesterday. Anyway, till next chapter and next review. Great job.