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MidnightWonder 2008-01-11 ch 68,	abuseOMG you need to make a third sequel! This is amazing, I think i'm in love with this.
Le Cosmonaute 2007-12-10 ch 68,	abuseHey, really sorry I never reviewed the other chapters, but there were too many to do in one night. Some parts seemed a little too dramatic, but overall this was great. I liked the first version of the Rose and the Thorn better, but not the sequel, so I read the alternate and then this, and am way more satisfied with how it turned out. Great work, and I hope A Christmas Rose turns out even better (seems so).
alittlelate 2007-11-21 ch 68,	abuseSo...IS THERE A SEQUEL?IF THERE IS PLEASE PM ME!loved the story by the way!
alittlelate 2007-11-21 ch 63,	abuseAw!That's so sweet!I'm happy that Dan and Rose are gonna get married!even if its in a hospital room!Well you've left me in tears again and my dad can't seem to figure out why all of a sudden i burst into tears of happyniess!haha!
alittlelate 2007-11-21 ch 53,	abuseOh My God...i couldn't read anymore for an hour after Kevin said he killed Kristen...:'(
alittlelate 2007-11-21 ch 51,	abuseDoes this mean Bekah is being held captive in a attic?
alittlelate 2007-11-18 ch 37,	abuseaww!its so sad,it made me cry,maybe its where i'm so attached to all the different versions,lol.
Spirella 2007-11-10 ch 68,	abuseI love the stuff that you write, and the fact that I am writing this review at nearly half five in the morning is surely testament to that fact. Most people don't stay up all night reading stuff on the internet... The only thing that distresses me a bit, has nothing at all to do with the things you write. It's you that distresses me - that you ask for reviews and opinion constantly. I can understand wanting constructive criticism, but sometimes you have to accept that there is none to be given, and that you shouldn't write for other people's approval - you should be writing for yourself. For your personal satisfaction. Perhaps getting a few people on reading over your chapters before you post them might give you the criticism you seek? I hope I don't come across too harshly - there's a great deal to be said for someone who consistently works with her characters and moulds them in story after story the way you've done. I wish I could be a more meticulous writer in that respect. Keep writing! :)
Kirri 2007-11-08 ch 40,	abuseThe way you go on about the differences between rich and poor seems really odd to me. I there a really obvious gap in social classes in the USA? I know there is gap here but it really isn't something that people are labeled with. I read the note on your profile, I think that Allie is just doing the common cover up techniques but you should have included her self punishment for it. I know she may just have eating 'issues' but i know first hand how the psychological demons start to pop up from the very start.
LadyArrin 2007-11-02 ch 68,	abuseAH! makes me miss my ex. he reminds me of dan. yes. sequel. much. =D
RedMoonChick 2007-11-01 ch 68,	abuseyes lol i know u finished. im glad u did but to be honest i will NOT be continuing to read the sequel. I think im good ending here. You just have too many versions of the same story with the same people and it gets a little... boring. anyway i'll keep a look out for any NEW stories that u write... later!
XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX 2007-10-31 ch 68,	abuseT_T last chapter! i loved this story! Perfect ending i do say so. I can't wait to finish the other story of The Rose and the Thorn. Keep up the great work! Hope to read more of your wonderful creations!
frozenxinxice 2007-10-31 ch 68,	abusei think the ending was amazing, although I really wanted to know what happened to Kevin and what was going on inside his head. Also, Jim and Alice? What happened? I would like to see a sequel, but I don't think it's absolutely necessary.
Estelin 2007-10-30 ch 68,	abuseI loved this story greatly. keep up the good work and writing
Lady Knight 1512 2007-10-30 ch 68,	abuseWhat a beautiful ending. I love how you brought it full circle by using the same song. Her encounter with Kevin was perfect. It showed her internal struggle: to forgive or not? It's big ask, so i'm glad you didn't make it easy for her, even with her faith in God. Just a SMALL typo. Or at least i THINK it's a typo. I suppose it fits, but i would have thought the other word fit better. But i haven't even said what the word is! Sorry. It's the third last line. "His breath becoming more erotic". Are you sure you didn't mean 'erAtic'? Erotic means sexual, but eratic means sort of choppy. I don't know. Maybe you DID mean to put erotic in. Still. My initial reaction was that you meant to use eratic. NOW! I really hope you DO do a sequel. I'm really looking forward to it. For the moment though, i have to check out this Sugar Plum Fairy story you've got going. It's different from you're other stuff, so i'm very excited. OH! And btw. Congrats on a very well-written story. Highly entertaining. ~Marie

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