Don't fall for him, Emma! It's a trap! I bet he's evil o_o

good start! ack! so close to doing so well! if you don't make so many short sentences, and combine some here and chsnge acouple there, the flow would be so much nicer, and it would be easer to read and understand. m, who comes out of the door?
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Curse the cliffhangers!! Some tension building between the two best friends... they seem interesting. The door sounds so cool! I want to know where it leads...