Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)

~Carm~

i liked i cant wait for the next chapter

I like this! A lot! It's unique, and I enjoyed it very much! I'll be awaiting for your updates. *wink*

Well written with a scintillating plot - keep up the good work!

I like where this story is going. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Faith

update

The story is wonderful. I like your use of language and writing style. PLEASE update soon! :]

Very interesting. I can't wait to read more of this!

~carm~

That was lovely. You definitely have a talent that few people on this site have. I mean it :)

Ugh, don't worry about taking awhile to put this up. I've got finals going on right now as well. It's horrible.

~carm~

Weird, but actually pretty cool! Please update soon!

This story is wonderful so far. I'm in love with the way you write. You balance your narration with the descriptions and dialogue perfectly. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~

Beautiful prologue. You've definitely got my attention now.

~carm~