LOL. Mackenzie is pretty entertaining! I love it :).

HOT!

It was cute.

I don't know, I guess Twilight killed vampires for me.

Even traditional ones...

And the ending didn't really do it for me... But it was still great!

love, bella.

I wasn't very satisfied with the ending, but it was cute. :)

Hahha, nice one-shot. I like this one too. I love vampires. xP

Aha. Everyone loves cookies. And british accents. (:

“Geez, way to go, Sawyer. You killed Kenzie.”

“Whoops?”

^LMAO

Wait wait, if she gets bitten, doesn't that mean, she turns into a vampire too?
or his not really a vampire and was she just hallicinating because she was weird and possibly drunk?

I'm a little confoosed. :<

But nice dialogue. It really flows and seems realistic.

Vampires are all so enigmatic

I obivously took your suggestion, oh and I'm meantitan or Belle from the yahoo group. My pen names different here. Oh but i really liked this, it was great.

and i mean whats the point of writing challenges if you arnt going to answer them yourself.

Y'know, it's odd. I don't think I've ever actually considered you as a /writer/. You've always been Queen of All Things SKoW. As strange as it sounds, I never considered that you could actually write, or even had an FP profile. Which is, of course, beyond stupid, as otherwise you wouldn't have been able to find all the stories for SKoW. But then, I'm not the brightest bulb.

Well, you can certainly write :).

Spike!! The challenge made me think of him too. I wrote a response to the same challenge just a coupla days ago - anything with biting just makes me think of him. M. And then Sawyer. That makes me think of Lost. M. Basically, nummyness. M.

I think it's a pretty neat story. It was vastly amusing, reading the way Kenzie thinks. And the dialogue was hilarious.

The only, only thing that I didn't like was Kenzie's gasping as she turned around to look at Sawyer. It seemed slightly over-dramatic.

Otherwise, I liked the story :)

Light-hearted and fun. Just like you specified :)

Good job.

cute story! I don't usually like vampire stories, but this one was kind of different which made for a painless, and even enjoyable read. great work :)

Ha! Great opening line...I have to agree, I never know whether or not I like going to clubs.
I'll be honest I don't like vampire fics and your title pretty much explains why. But I liked the humour in this, the little schizophrenic sarcastic bits were super funny! and you managed to convey a good sense of MacKenzie's and Sarah's character.
Being British myself, the accent probably wouldn't do it for me as much, but aren't vampires always Brits...whyowhy?
I laughed when Sawyer just went right out and bit her...the line you put in the challenge was funny!

Kenzie cracks me up.

AND, British vampire! That gave you lots of brownie points. Lot and lots :)

I love it, and it is win. In a bottle.

i cracked up a lot on this one. it seemed that seeing a vampire wasnt a strange legendary thing. felt almost common place
Kenzie's and Sara's relationship is kind of like that of me and my bestfriend. I'm more like Kenzie, im like ok i showed up at your party only because you asked me too but of course im just standing there and then im like well i showed up and im leaving now to be in a place where im more comfortable hehe Then she'd say something that would make me feel bad and I'll end up staying maybe dance a little with a stranger though no one like the mysterious Sawyer.

“You know my name.”

“Point being?”

“We’re not strangers.”

“You—you, just… ugh! Why are you so frustrating? You could’ve warned me. That would’ve been a nice courtesy. Or maybe you could’ve worn an ‘I bite, ask me why!’ button.”

ROFL Kenzie is plain amusing, i like her :)

and hangovers are no fun

im not sure i understood the dont kill yourself part and Kenzie thinking he did a nice job of it or maybe im just dense.

the challenge stated that it must involve a cookie, what do you mean by that?

yeah cannibals, not fun to read or watch. i was bored yesterday nad ended up watching supernatural yeah cannibals, i think i had to mute the volume and close my eyes. i could have just turned off the tv but i figured it was ok to peek esp if i wasnt hearing anything

i have no idea where i was going with this rambling

point is i liked Predictable

Awesome. Lol, Kenzie was like me but wow, she actually slept with him.

This is really good! even though it was a challenge, I think it would be cool to expand this into a full-lenght story.