Good job on painting a picture. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

well, true...

nice...

Usually, I detest haikus; most of them seem to be written by people who lack poetic talent, so they throw together a few syllables in a known form and call themselves poets.

But THIS was lovely. I got a sense of despair from the imagery, and your words were powerful and meaningful. Great work, Erin!
~Kira's Song

Really good!Powerful with so little words.

Very nice haiku. Gives you something to think about.

Thanks for the review and the suggestion.

Rowan.