wow..that is sure pretty short, but otherwise i like it...its very good...can't believe its over already..bye..bye...

Very cute

Apprently, I didn't review this the first time I read it. Anyways, I love this story! It's short, yes, but it's amazing. I just didn't like the fact that Mr. Doctor didn't write to her at all for so long.

But she didn't care & she's the one marrying him. Oh well.

Good writing!!

its cute!

its a "warm-and-fuzzy-feelings" story! XD

so cute and so sweet! You have a way of making a story "aw".
well done! write more ^^

Aww, this was cute. I loved it. The only thing that bother me was that you switched from past tense to the present tense.. and then at times it went back to the past tense. Just make sure it's consistent.
But other than that, I thought that was very well-described while she waited for him. It'd be awesome if you could turn this into a full story instead of a one-shot. Good job!

Just Breathing
AKA: Steph from Reviewer's Found

Aww, that's so sweet!
It was kind of funny picturing the man in his lab coat and proposing. ;)

I really like this story...it's so well written and it's so damn cute lol

Keep it up!!

Go hide in the corner!

Okay, so I was kidding. It's pretty good for the shortness, and the song in the beginning really does fit it well.

I just have a few issues with your tenses. I would go back and check through them to make sure you are staying consistent with your past-present-past perfect...

For example: "The rose is back in her cheeks and the sparkle back in her eyes; she knew exactly who sent it."

You shift from present to past within the same sort of thought-sequence.

Just a small error, and I'm sure it can be easily fixed. :)

sweet and perfect!

i applaud u.

ur stories are always special and different!

Aww, it's cute!

This is good, butalittle tooshort.So are you gog to continue? If you are, thenit's ging on my favourites.

That was great! ^_^ Lol. Very sweet.

Aw. Too short, if anything! I want more, lol. :) I would've liked more history and more examples of time they spent together! And I do like the last line. Very satisfying. :)

Wow, that's so sweet!
I wanted to check out some of your work since you commented on how we write about the same length of paragraph.
I just wanted to tell you that you're really good!