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| Setsuna529 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThe ending is fantastic - subtle but with a sting. |
| Ivy Shoelaces 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThis made me giggle. Excellent work. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseLove the last lines - that made me laugh. Awesome job. THanks for the review! Rowan. |
| LiberryBooked 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseHahaha! The last line made me smile. Actually the whole poem made me smile. Definitely a job well done. |
| secretpoet4life 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abusehahaha I completely adore this poem. I agree that the last part had the best lines. Good work! |
| whisperedXkiss 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseHahaha, this reminds me of so many people that I have the unfortunate ahem...pleasure of knowing. I love the last line...it made me laugh |
| a silenced revolution 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI love your last two lines. Nice metaphors throughout the piece. Good job. |