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Reviews For: Just another girl

Setsuna529
2008-07-28
ch 1,
abuseThe ending is fantastic - subtle but with a sting.
Ivy Shoelaces
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuseThis made me giggle. Excellent work.
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2007-05-28
ch 1,
abuseLove the last lines - that made me laugh. Awesome job.

THanks for the review!

Rowan.
LiberryBooked
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abuseHahaha! The last line made me smile. Actually the whole poem made me smile. Definitely a job well done.
secretpoet4life
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abusehahaha I completely adore this poem. I agree that the last part had the best lines. Good work!
whisperedXkiss
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abuseHahaha, this reminds me of so many people that I have the unfortunate ahem...pleasure of knowing.

I love the last line...it made me laugh
a silenced revolution
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abuseI love your last two lines. Nice metaphors throughout the piece. Good job.
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