Though this did start out as a cliche, it soon became something more. Something amazing.
The only problem that I had with reading this was that there didn't seem to be a real ending. I mean, there was an ending, but it just seems as though there is more to this story somewhere. Like, we never even find out who Mason's mystery girl is.
Still, this was a fantastic read.

I completely agree wtih you...who doesn't love a good cliche? Good job so far. I plan on reading it straight through even though it's late now.

Just read the entire story and I love it. Jaide and Blaize are so... meant for each other. Poor Mason. Anyway, good job!:)

Oh my God! I love Leith! He's awesome, I love him more than Blaize. Hah. Funny, he's not even the main character. He's just so... cool. I'd totally read a story on him, I hope you write one on him. =D I just had to comment on this chapter, it's like my second favorite, the first one was... chapter 31, where they had truth or dare. That chapter was really interesting, so is this. =D

i is re-reading.
there are a couple of inconsistancies, like:
“I know, I know, Bella, you’re up.”
“Ok. I have never kissed someone of the same sex...or opposite sexual orientation.” She added with a glance at the gay couple.

she had three kids and never kissed anyone?
and they ask if anyone recieved a hand job and Blaize didn't say anything.

but it's still good! :-)

I read Full Court Press first actually lol. I hope you've got another story coming soon! ;)


Maybe a hockey team story?

Two days! 8 hours! (6 of them straight...)

I just have to say you are a writing Queen! love ur characters, plotlines, everything! Thank you so very much for putting so much time and passion into ur stories. They're awesome!

hey this was a awesome story. I've noticed it around a few times but was kind of put off reading it because i thought it was going to be a real cliched story where every guy falls head over heels for her but yea it wasnt like that at all.

I've been searching for a good story for ages but this is the first one to get me hooked. I'm kind of sad now i was searching for something i could read on the plane but after the first few chapter i kinda had to read it all at once.

Aww! This is a really sweet story! I love it! *Wipes a tear*
I really, really, really love it!

omc NO! not leith and jaide, that's so wrong! PEH.
as long as blaze and jaide'll be together, in the end, i don't hate you...does leith=anderson? lol

m romance ;)
and, um...wow with that "Dad", if you can even call him that. EW. not in a critisizing way to your story, just that, ya know, the concept is pretty EW. And here i thought it was just abuse like violence :S
but great story so far, and i'm sure i'll only get better xD

hey, i just finished reading Full Court Press, and i think i see some similarities... moody guy that hates her help and niceness, homework help needed by him... girl who talks bout sexish things, tomboy
BUT ME LOVE!

I feel sorry for Blaize...
It seemed that she trusted leith more than she trusted Blaize...
I dont understand her concept on trusting someone completely... it seemed slutty... but then again she had a very bad past and maybe you have a reason for writing this

Blaize is such a sweetheart...
He's just so good to be true...

I hate this chapter...
They shouldn't be doing that, I mean although Blaize and Jaide are not really together, but I dont know, it seemed wrong...
I hate u for writing this...
Poor Blaize...