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| angelblissjoy 2008-12-05 ch 24,   | great story keep it up!update son |
| Catherine Kate 2008-11-30 ch 24, | *gIgGlEs... That's nice... I like it. \(^_^)/ Blaize was really tested there. -- Answer to your question: Blaize and Jaide are better. I loved them first and will ever be! BTW: Thank you for updating. catherine_kate |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-11-23 ch 24, | more romance between Jaide and Blaize please! |
| Jen 2008-11-18 ch 24, | i just finished chapter 24 and i love it! no more jaide mason stuff. i think jaide should be w/ blaize! |
| bekahlu 2008-11-17 ch 24, | nice chapter! I like the introduction of Mayson! although i think he's funny, i like him as Jadie's prtective friend rather than her boyfriend, but maybe because i am more biased towards Blaize! lol! update soon |
| featherstone13 2008-11-17 ch 24, | i like it keep writing and i like Jaide and Blaize together thier a good couple fly on and keep writing feather's |
| moonlighthaterd07 2008-11-17 ch 24, | hey i love this story keep it up |
| rebz 2008-11-17 ch 24, | Sorry, this chapter just turned me off the story. jaide and blaize's characters have been going down hill since parker came into the picture. I just don't like her anymore. She's coming across as a bit of a slut, and to be honest I know that's not what you meant her to come across as. I like Blaize - but he is starting to resemble something I don't like. A hypocrit. I do like how he sort of changes gears and stuff. |
| Boo81393 2008-11-17 ch 24, | that was really good and i prefer Blaize and Jaide, Mason kind of sketches me out lol |
| Jevanminx 2008-11-17 ch 24, | I think the Mason and Jaide thing was good he reacted well, and I love Ethan and that cheerleader flip, so cool, but I think I would have liked to see her team mates expressions about it a bit more, but maybe thats just me cause I loved it anyway, hehehe. JM |
| sparks11 2008-11-17 ch 24, | i really like this story! I hope theres more! |
| Davy B 2008-11-17 ch 24, | In response to your question I would definitely say keep up this thing while Blaize and Jaide. I'm a huge shipper of those two and I really like the way their relationship is progressing. As far as the chapter itself, another stellar piece of work. I feel like you might have been able to go a little more in depth when it came to the romance (such as describing the "steamy" hot tub scene) but no real complaints. Keep up the rapid updates, I like them. |
| Vampire0175 2008-11-16 ch 24, | Awesome story so far! Can't wait for you to update! ~Raven |
| Izzey 2008-11-16 ch 24, | another awesome chapter. please update again soon |
| x-LlOVe 2008-11-16 ch 24, | Lool |