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| afk 2007-07-16 ch 1,   | OMG so cool! ,me wants to know more! you ahev more stories of this you say? O_o |
| Lena 2007-05-31 ch 1, | Ha! I finally finished it! You didn't think I ever would, did you?! *cough* Anyway~ Other than your switching to present tense now and then, it's written so perfectly that I want to cry T_T You said you don't know where to go with it, right? Well my idea might be very obvious and very cliche, but um... ok, so the boys ask someone shady for help and make some kind of a deal that will surely bite them in teh ** later. They sneak into Tenshihana and look for Ceata. Meanwhile, the adults find out about Urius too and force their way in, and the commotion they create unknowingly allows the boys to be unnoticed. The adults catch Urius and Rowan somewhere (which I was confused about, are there 2 Rowans? o_o;) and don't quite believe that Urius wasn't the kidnapper unless they hear the story from Ceata himself. Meanwhile, the lil boys find Ceata and try to take him back home, only to fall into some trap set up by the shady person whom they asked for help. Of course, when Urius and the shifters don't find Ceata where Usius said he would be, they take it VERY badly and leave VERY angry. Depending on how long you want the thing to be, this could just blow over when they boys are finally found, or it could turn into another bloody war XD (which sounds kinda cool). And um... so yea, Urius is worried sick cause he realizes that Ceata was kidnapped once more, and sets out (with Rowan's help mabby) to find him. Blah blah... after some suffering on the boys' part and some heroics on Urius' part, all ends well and the lil brats are returned home. Of course, seeing as how Ceata gets really attached to Urius, his parents promise to let him take Urius as a mate when he's old enough~ Aw... |