I enjoyed reading this poem. The word choice and the use of imagery such as, "when mother nature unleased her ice" and "taking away our past/ as the moon does with the light of stars" were well written. For the structure of the poem, at first, there seems to be a sort of rhyme scheme where the second sentence rhymed with the fourth, however the scheme is slightly altered throughout the poem. The form consists of predominatly 4 lines stanzas, but I like how they're inconsistent, reflecting the mood of the narrator's wavering heart. The last line is pretty weak and probably meant that way because it reflects the narrator's own emotions about moving on. I think it would have more impact if a metaphor was used like the previous stanzas. Overall, great poem.