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| LiberryBooked 2007-05-27 ch 1, | I think that instead you should use the lyrics as a reference and write a complete story instead of this broken up thing that you have right now. You've got the right idea, but it would be easier to read and more unique if you wrote it prose style without any lyrics, or with the lyrics in a clump at the beginning. |
| kstar129 2007-05-27 ch 1, | I'm reveiwing myself!You r awesome me! |