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| MajesticWriter 2008-06-21 ch 1,  | abuse*Stares wide eyed at computer screen* Yea, um that was different id like to say. I never of course read anything like that before with any murderers or anything like that. I wasn't quite expecting that. I am glad to see that you are going to continue this as a series which makes me greedy for more. Let me just wait and see how they either get away with it or go to jail for it. I can already see where you are heading with the story, and I am praying for Avery so he doesn't get his ass thrown in jail because of his brother's addiction to kill using Avery. I want to read more! Karen Co-Founder of the Reviewers Kingdom |
| magalina 2008-05-19 ch 6, | abuseAh, poor Avery...though I don´t feel too bad for him...I feel bad for Weston for getting involved with them -.- I´m sorry it took me so long to read this and missing an update! D: Loved it ;) |
| magalina 2008-05-19 ch 5, | abuse"Who knew what kind of psychotic tenants there were in this building?" ha! On to the next chapter~ |
| The Intelligent Designer 2008-04-20 ch 6, | abuseY'all are gross...it's brilliant... |
| Rachizzle 2008-04-19 ch 6, | abuseARIC IS TOO COCKY. He's not as powerful as he thinks he is. Taking weak people, or girl that don't know what's coming - that's not power, that's foolishness because he knows they won't fight back if he's nice. >_> sorry XD ANYWAYS i liked the chapter. |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseGah, Aric's crazy! But I like him ^^ He's just so...I dunno, but he's fun. Oh, poor Avery...he needs a hug...or an escape route and a new identity... Ah, looking forward to next time! XD |
| Love Eternally 2008-04-12 ch 6, | abuseI kinda really feel sorry for aric. |
| Digital Eclipse 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuseI must admit, when I first looking at the forenote (describing what it was) I was shocked. However, the very first paragraph had me hooked and I couldn't stop reading them. This is the first of your stories I have read and I will be eagerly reading the others. I just hope they're as good! Really, really good. I love Aric! |
| Amindaya 2008-03-13 ch 5, | abuseMuch yay. And mention of quesadillas makes me hungry. Have I mentioned yet that Avery is super-cute? In a meek, squeezable way? |
| omg-wtf 2008-02-02 ch 5, | abuseI am now hungry and want taco bell for the second time today. |
| omg-wtf 2008-02-02 ch 4, | abuseI do talk to those strangers ^__^ |
| Rachizzle 2008-01-20 ch 5, | abuseWO. WESTON AND AVERY ARE GONNA GET IT ON. *pelvic thrusts* |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-19 ch 5, | abuseAh, Avery is so cute! He sounds like he needs a hug :P Good thing Weston's there, then, eh? |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseI like Aric despite his homicidal tendencies, extreme rage, and meanness to Avery. ...I wonder if that's a bad thing? |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-19 ch 3, | abuseAh, bad things are gonna happen to him, I bet. |