That's teenagers for you, huh? We are a strange bunch, indeed. Fav lines:

"now we are the free artists,
with wings to spread,
blue sky to sail,
and (too many) canvases to paint."

I think we all feel like that, like we have the entire world at our feet, but there's just too much to do and we all get a little overwhelmed.

Anyway, very beautiful.

this gives new meaning to the idea that art is life. This is AMAZING! Really. I really, really really love this poem.

Wow, there's so much power in the last line, it just leaves me speechless. And I've always loved analogies that involved flying. Take care.

seriously, you are getting good at poems. xDD
i really love this one.
it's like giving in everything exactly when we get everything, for some reasons... it's deep.

This is interesting. Different. I like it.

ooh. i had to read this a couple of times to let it sink in properly & each time i swear it got better! i love the 'and (too many) canvases to paint' & the style of the first couple of verses. nice work ~Bex