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| IlfirinEstel 2007-06-01 ch 1,   | That's teenagers for you, huh? We are a strange bunch, indeed. Fav lines: "now we are the free artists, with wings to spread, blue sky to sail, and (too many) canvases to paint." I think we all feel like that, like we have the entire world at our feet, but there's just too much to do and we all get a little overwhelmed. Anyway, very beautiful. |
| EverMe 2007-05-30 ch 1, | this gives new meaning to the idea that art is life. This is AMAZING! Really. I really, really really love this poem. |
| she smolders 2007-05-30 ch 1, | Wow, there's so much power in the last line, it just leaves me speechless. And I've always loved analogies that involved flying. Take care. |
| imbeciru 2007-05-30 ch 1, | seriously, you are getting good at poems. xDD i really love this one. it's like giving in everything exactly when we get everything, for some reasons... it's deep. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-05-28 ch 1, | This is interesting. Different. I like it. |
| polka dots and addictions 2007-05-28 ch 1, | ooh. i had to read this a couple of times to let it sink in properly & each time i swear it got better! i love the 'and (too many) canvases to paint' & the style of the first couple of verses. nice work ~Bex |