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| Kissing Concrete 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseADORABLE! loved it, so refreshing, humorous and all that jazz! i highly enjoyed reading this, nice job! |
| Needa S 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseI almost fell off my chair laughing. Awesome write. Keep'em coming and God Bless. |
| Ebonina 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThat's cute and very clever too!♪♫ |
| LittleDoe 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseA funny, humorous story in a poem. The rythem is good and the words make sence. My favorite stanza is: "As we know many princesses have no brain And Paladina was one of that kind. She was crying and moaning and groaning all day When a bad idea came to her mind." I don't know exactly why, but is cought my fancy and touched my funny bone. You did this very well. Well Done. God Bless You ~LittleDoe |
| Rapture Whispers 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abusewow, how sad! Very cute though, it's nice to hear fairy tales without happy endings every now and then. Cool names. |
| guess who's back babies 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseWouldn't she have gotten married before 25? Oh well poetic license! It was...cute! ^-^ A little strange but my work's not more normal. |
| Dante's Disciple 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, it was so pleasant and fairy tale sounding at the start and then the ending was hillarious. Great rhyming to, Brilliant work :) |