 Kissing Concrete 2008-02-17 . chapter 1ADORABLE!
loved it, so refreshing, humorous and all that jazz! i highly enjoyed reading this, nice job! |
 Needa S 2007-11-03 . chapter 1I almost fell off my chair laughing. Awesome write. Keep'em coming and God Bless. |
 Ebonina 2007-08-31 . chapter 1That's cute and very clever too!♪♫ |
 LittleDoe 2007-07-15 . chapter 1A funny, humorous story in a poem. The rythem is good and the words make sence. My favorite stanza is:
"As we know many princesses have no brain
And Paladina was one of that kind.
She was crying and moaning and groaning all day
When a bad idea came to her mind."
I don't know exactly why, but is cought my fancy and touched my funny bone. You did this very well. Well Done.
God Bless You
~LittleDoe |
 Rapture Whispers 2007-06-08 . chapter 1wow, how sad! Very cute though, it's nice to hear fairy tales without happy endings every now and then. Cool names. |
 guess who's back babies 2007-05-28 . chapter 1Wouldn't she have gotten married before 25? Oh well poetic license!
It was...cute! ^-^ A little strange but my work's not more normal. |
 Dante's Disciple 2007-05-28 . chapter 1Brilliant, it was so pleasant and fairy tale sounding at the start and then the ending was hillarious. Great rhyming to, Brilliant work :) |