ADORABLE!

loved it, so refreshing, humorous and all that jazz! i highly enjoyed reading this, nice job!

I almost fell off my chair laughing. Awesome write. Keep'em coming and God Bless.

That's cute and very clever too!♪♫

A funny, humorous story in a poem. The rythem is good and the words make sence. My favorite stanza is:
"As we know many princesses have no brain
And Paladina was one of that kind.
She was crying and moaning and groaning all day
When a bad idea came to her mind."
I don't know exactly why, but is cought my fancy and touched my funny bone. You did this very well. Well Done.
God Bless You
~LittleDoe

wow, how sad! Very cute though, it's nice to hear fairy tales without happy endings every now and then. Cool names.

Wouldn't she have gotten married before 25? Oh well poetic license!

It was...cute! ^-^ A little strange but my work's not more normal.

Brilliant, it was so pleasant and fairy tale sounding at the start and then the ending was hillarious. Great rhyming to, Brilliant work :)