Hey but that was an horrible story ! XD Did you want to make me cry my eyes out ?

I have tree things to say.

First, the title was intriguing, but when I read what was the last line I wished I hadn't read the title nor the summary for I felt spoiled. I wouldn't have minded some suspense it could have added to the drama and actually bring some tears.
The story itself was very ok. When I first read that he was smoking, I can't say my sympathy did not took a hit, but well, it just added to his misery-mistery aspect (seriously, what with that strange 'wonderful' music ? ^^

I felt a little annoyed at the society (I don't say I wasn't before or am not anymore...) but was I'm sad about is more the way it changed the girl. The realistic aspect is... special in this one. A little cruel I'd say. No. Very cruel. Because not only will he have to live and cope with said society, but he will have to do it during so many more years !

Finally, you just killed me not telling where he may have gone. Gone, not become, for that, sure, is answered by the last sentence, but where did he got? What was his live in the city? There was so many questions I was very curious about ! XD
What did you made it an OS !?
Well I guess I will have to resign myself...

Take care (hoping to read more from you soon)!

Very sweet idea. I love how the elf was placed in our society, and that she thought that he was an angel. What struck me as intersting was the fact that he smoked. What does that have anything to do with being elfish. Or maybe it just places him in our world more.