 Amethyst Asheryn 2007-08-18 . chapter 1heheh. Love it! It made me grin...
I like: 1. That Luna is *not* the werecat. I would have gone "god, that's so unoriginal" if she was.
2. That Raven is a boy Have you ever seen how many stories out there have characters named Raven? Have you ever read fanfiction? And if you have, have you ever found any that have Raven as some kind of (shudder) Mary Sue? Not dissing the name--I happen to love it--but I still like that you made Raven a boy :D
I love your characters, and the plot...And I'm off to read more. |