sad and a poem i think that shows truth. not as bold as it could have been but its nice.

I like the repetition.

i really like this! I especially like the title being repeated!

I loved it. I thought it was a very powerfull story inside the poem.

Very cool. If this is a free verse poem, excellent job.

But if it is not:

THe rhythm is very...er...jumbled. PAy attention to syllables per line, it can make all the difference.