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Reviews For: I Don't Understand & What Bugs Me

whispered something profoun...
2007-05-28
ch 1,
omg! i love the lines "what i understand best is/ why icecream comes in a thousand flavors/ why tears are transparant/ why laughter is contagious"

it's great!

the italics in the middle od the stanzas caught me off guard though. i'm used to a stanza covering only one topic. but you said this wasn't your format, so whatever.
Kate Collinson
2007-05-28
ch 1,
I really liked the "What i understand most is Why tears are transparent." It's great. Alot of the things that you wrote about in the I Don't Understand poem were things that I'd never thought about before. But I have a feeling, that because of your poem, I will be thinking about them a lot more.
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