(A smile is only a smile for so long;
after that, sweetheart, it’s just teeth.)

- killer lines

I'm new to the whole fictionpress deal,
but oh my goodness.
Of all the poems I have read so far on this website,
this is my favorite.

It is beautiful, emotional, original, and gave me little tingles.

Please keep writing =]

i like this
the last two lines were killer

yeah, come september, i'll be hating them again. never really stopped hating boys, though.

"(A smile is only a smile for so long; after that, sweetheart, it’s just teeth.)"

that's one of THOSE lines, y'know what I mean?

Wow. Very powerful and deep - I LOVE the ending.

Love the ending so much. It just hits hard.

As usual, you've written a great poem. Keep writing.

this poem is very true/powerful, so I like a lot.

First writing I've read in awhile that really gave me to smile.
Humor in a twisted way...I like it *smiles!