|Reviews for your side of the moon|
| fairytale failure 7/7/07 . chapter 1
I really liked this. Why? I'm not sure...
I liked that it was sad, but at the same time, powerful. The format (i.e. bolded words) worked really well too.
| she smolders 5/30/07 . chapter 1
I love how the words you bolded make them stand out and mean so much more. This was just lovely especially how you describe things in such a way that it makes cry.
| Faded-once-again 5/29/07 . chapter 1
| winteria 5/29/07 . chapter 1
| Ashelin 5/28/07 . chapter 1
I more than adored this. This is how I feel right at this moment, maybe with a little more resentment, but wow. I loved this. It was wonderful. Great job!
| i'd delete this if possible 5/28/07 . chapter 1
I wonder if it would amuse you to know that I'm smiling. The bitterness in here is tangible. I love the use of 'sugar'. It definitely adds to the feeling. I love the dark sentiment of it all- 'i hope that your side of the moon is darker than mine.' I can just *hear* someone spitting that at someone else who didn't even give them a chance whether out of fear, whatever. Awesome.
| kloun mannequin 5/28/07 . chapter 1
I like your poem, it's so powerful.
| whispered something profound 5/28/07 . chapter 1
i like this. the metaphor thing is very original.