it cute, the way justin and jackie act around each other :) keep updateing please

i like this!

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That was just beautiful...Natalie seems like an interesting character...Update (:

Nice story.

I'm enjoying it but at times it is a little slow.

it's awesome. just one question:does brandon cheat on jackie's mom? and if he does, i hope jackie nails him. i think jackie, justin and vincent become really close.

this chapter was amazhing...drama wise, character developmental wise and in every other way...i really like justin even more now, i hope jackie and him'll get together in the end (: love the tension between mr. howells and jackie and vincent and jackie...i really cant wait to see where this goes! keep it up and update soon!

...Wow... I a have a feeling that that phone call was bad...

Great story! Definitely can't wait until the next chapter!

congratulations, uve just created the hottest character ev-er! srsly, justin is very very sexehh...

'you're so modest'

'modesty's a waste of that'

pompous asshole...lol...!

woo! nice story but i could tell Justin was a pain coz in my experience ALL guys whose names start with "J" are troublesome. Keep writing!

I liked it! And I feel that there will be some tension between Jamie and Justin won't there?

good story. :) justin and jackie are funny together.

The story's alright. Not great or aything, but alright. And just for your information, I don't think Jackie is a bitch. She has every right to be angry.

hehee...amazing chappie! justin's hilarious and jackie is equally so, in her own dry way. as for vincent...might take some time 2 decide whether i like him or not,...

Yay! I loved your new chapter! Keep updating! And it totally wasn't cool about the "Jackass I mean Jackie" thing. That guys a pain.