Reviews for Spiderman Mac ‘n’ Cheese

Reviews For: Spiderman Mac ‘n’ Cheese

Yellow.Jellow 2008-11-03 ch 1,	That was just great!! no additional comments required.
Summer Frost 2008-09-27 ch 1,	they are so immature
Green Eyed Angel 2008-09-11 ch 1,	That's cute. But it's mostly dialouge, but still. You can see all the emotions and such.
RoseLife 2007-12-31 ch 1,	loved it! got a tinsy bit confused who was talking at times, but IT WAS GREAT! well done xD
substitute angel 2007-12-28 ch 1,	Hi, Wow. LOL. I really loved reading this. It made me laugh the whole way through and it was just what I needed at 2 AM in the morning. I'm glad I decided to check out your work. This is especially humorous. Thanks so much for reading my story and reviewing...and adding it to your favorites list :D You have no idea how you've just made my day. Cheers Blue Calico
SavRm4MiLuv 2007-06-17 ch 1,	aw! This was the most random, adorable, and utterly perfect one-shot I've ever read! It had me laughing and swooning. Cools!
its.Nothing.Special 2007-06-01 ch 1,	OMGG! I loved that! :DD Too sweet, my friend. I'm not usually one for complete-dialogue-ness...but this was just awesome. I loved how you were able to tell what was going on, even if there were no real descriptions. [“Um…You can let go of my hand now.”] Like that. Hehehe. [“Could an associate please report to aisle four? There’s a spill in aisle four. Cleanup on aisle four.” “Who knew cans of Spaghetti-Os could roll that fast? Did you know they could roll that fast, Daniel?” “Nope. Maybe the floor is slanted. You know, the leaning Tower of Albertson’s.”] Sorry to quote such a huge chunk, but THAT WAS AWESOME. I seriously l-o-v-e-d those lines. Classic. Brilliant. Hilarious. I could totally imagine myself doing that with my brothers. :DD Hmm...I wonder who caused that mess on aisle 4? :P Kay, so I really liked this. Duh. Really well-written and awesomely original. SPIDERMAN 3 WAS AMAZING. Like this story. :DD Keep writing! (And thanks for the reviews..hehe. :)) Definitely a fav. ;)becky
Kristen 2007-05-29 ch 1,	Ok. That was just really really really...cute. I loved it. The plain dialogue never usually works, but I think that is what made this story so funny. Annyyway. I loved it (once again)
Jazzi 2007-05-29 ch 1,	No, no, no. You've got the bologna song all wrong. It goes my BOLOGNA has a first name: It's O-S-C-A-R My BOLOGNA has a second name: It's M-E-Y-E-R I ME to eat IT every day and if you ask me why I'll say 'Cause Oscar Meyer has a way with B-O-L-O-G-N-A I thought if you could get the end of the song right you'd be able to spell bologna. I thought wrong.
LadyLush 2007-05-29 ch 1,	wow i didnt know all dialogue would be so good but i thought your story was really cute lol x
Cortney 2007-05-29 ch 1,	I LOVED THIS! It was adorable and random and hilarious - all things a good story should be, if you ask me. Wonderful job! I liked the all-dialogue format, too.
remae 2007-05-28 ch 1,	This was pretty cool/cute! It's rare to see something with ALL dialouge on fictionpress becuase it usually doesn't work out, but you pulled it off GREAT. It was really enjoyable to read, great job! Keep writing!
Semicharmed love 2007-05-28 ch 1,	Oh wow. That was super cute. :)) I loved how random it was, but it still made sense. It was funny, too. I giggled. lol Anyways, yea...cute story!! :D
t-t-t-ouch. 2007-05-28 ch 1,	That's great. Sounds like something I would do in a store! Bravo!

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