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| Zigeunerin 2007-05-28 ch 1,   | If this was a movie, it would be dreadfully annoying; you know, one of those awful films that shows a glimpse of a scene and then another and another without really explaining what's going on? It works far better in poetry. I like this style; it doesn't thoroughly describe anything but it still evokes...not thought, really...feeling, I suppose. Every line is a little, three-worded glimpse of what's going on. Very stylish. |
| I_be_dishwasher 2007-05-28 ch 1, | vivid ^__^ |