If this was a movie, it would be dreadfully annoying; you know, one of those awful films that shows a glimpse of a scene and then another and another without really explaining what's going on?

It works far better in poetry. I like this style; it doesn't thoroughly describe anything but it still evokes...not thought, really...feeling, I suppose. Every line is a little, three-worded glimpse of what's going on. Very stylish.

vivid ^__^