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| Kenna-Kat11 2007-08-14 ch 1,  | abusewow...that was amazing...and scarily true seeing as more and more people are "playing with ana" and i love the perspective...awesome awesome job...keep writing ~E~ |
| BeautifulAssassin 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abusewow...this is a really powerful poem. I love the perspective - it's different to most other poems about eating disorders...and the playing games thing was creepy...keep writing! |
| Talyth 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseVery good. I like the different "games" you used... not quite like any other e.d. poems I've read. Really interesting. |
| Rachel Evans 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was an amazing poem. I honestly think that it is one of your best. I love how unique the perspective is, and the idea of it all being games is very interesting. Awesome poem. ^_^ *invisihug* |
| Black And Silver Stars 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThat actually descripes a lot. I mean the whole playing a game thing is a scary way to look at it. wow. amazing. |
| lovingme 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love this! This is yet another one of your awesome writings :) |
| t-t-t-ouch. 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseScarily true. Great work. |
| insomniac 2007-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseTalk about depressing. But I suppose it would be worse to write about such a serious issue any other way. I used to know someone anoroexic and it's awful seeing them get thinner and thinner but still keep starving themself. A very powerful poem, in my opinion. Keep writing. |