WTFFFFFFFF gosh ,..its cute nd all but nxt BAM ! no final thing gosh sequeal plz ?

Creative, very creative. It's unlike the stories I usually read.

Sooooo cute! I love it!

I massive vote for a sequel.

Oho I liked it! I wish there was more :) so I could see whether it would ever really work out or not haha.

By the way, the cookie reference. Ingenious how you added it! I didn't recognise it as a reference at all! - And I've read a couple of fics for this bite requirement thing. :)

I kind of want to tear your eyeballs out of their sockets with gleaming pairs of garden shears for leaving a hopeful reader like myself pondering the outcome of their little love story, but I also know that had you given this story a solid ending, I would have dismissed it as yet another cliched story with nothing particularly outstanding about it.

So basically, what I was trying to convey through my semi-violent review/comment thing on your story is that I really, really enjoyed it, every single aspect of it, and though it pains me to say this, the bittersweet aspect of it was my favourite part of the story. Rest assured that my violent threats are usually not carried out.

so lovely, and yet really bittersweet. i really hope that in fiction-land, they realise that they're both in love with one another and yay happy ending!

I have to say this is one of the funniest short stories I have ever read - thanks for making my day! Well-written, bitey (pun intended) and so incredibly real.

Excellent.

I really like this. Smart, funny, the two different voices are distinct enough. Very good.

hahaha. aww :)

cool one-shot! ;D

This was great :) I really enjoyed the varied personalities and not-so-happy ending. Good work!

Again, love it. Especially the fact that there's not solid conclusion between the two, and so it's not ULTRA cliched. :D

that's kind of a dark humour, really it's a pity they don't get together at the end of the story T_T

This was really good! I like how you did the story from both of their POV's, instead of just leaving it at one, or even 3rd person.

-Jess

Loved it!

Mia