Reviews for Not Another Sob Story

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Aimers 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseAgain, love it. Especially the fact that there's not solid conclusion between the two, and so it's not ULTRA cliched. :D
Boo 2008-03-09 ch 1, anon.	abusethat's kind of a dark humour, really it's a pity they don't get together at the end of the story T_T
summerdaze87 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseThis was really good! I like how you did the story from both of their POV's, instead of just leaving it at one, or even 3rd person. -Jess
mia5081 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseLoved it! ~Mia
x3life 2008-02-06 ch 1,	abuseaww this was so good!! haha. i really liked it... but I wanna know what happends afterwardss.. =)
norma 2007-12-06 ch 1, anon.	abusewow! that was an awesome piece! i wish i had talent like you
florissant 2007-09-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh damn, there should be more to this story. i'd really read the rest of a 21 chapter story w/ this theme if you did really write more
ess3sandra 2007-07-11 ch 1,	abuseso they will go on and dance around eachother forever until one day when one of them will get married to someone else and they will spill their hearts out but itwill already be to late. am i right?
Groperfish 2007-07-09 ch 1,	abuseWow, I love it! Short, but effective. It's really well written, and seriously left me wanting more. Ever consider a story about the characters? I'd read it, for sure.
Kjersti 2007-07-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseGod damn it! This WAS another sob story! Why can't they get together? Argh! Anyway, superbly written, as always. :)
Queen Sebastian 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abusevery good. but i hate that its a oneshot. write another chapter, please?
milenaa 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is absolutely cute! I've like mostly everything and you write well, no spelling mistakes or whatever. Like nearly everyone has pointer out, it's just the switching of POV's that gets a bit confusing. Maybe you could bold it as well. Given that you use italics for thoughts, when you made his name in the style it seemed, at first, that it was just Berlin's thoughts about him once more. BY the way, I totally loved the names. Especially Berlin. I have a thing for naming my characters after cities and countries too.
Frozen From Mist 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseWow, that pretty good for how many requirements there were. At first I thought it would be predictable like most girl falls for her best friend stuff, but it wasn't. It kind of shows that not everyone has a happy ending. Blaire and Berlin (I love those names by the way) are really convincing characters. Your characterization is strong although I think that Berlin's personality, outside of her accidental cruelty, is a little weak. Of course that's probably just in her half of the story she's drunk and you really can't tell anything from her actions. Maybe if Blaire went into her personality a little more readers could relate better. Another thing I noticed was that it's kind of hard to believe that Blaire even loves her until he comes out and says it at the end because it seems that his plan to dance with her is just some way to 'get close' to her. You've probably already heard this, but the POV switch is a little confusing. Otherwise, I don't know what else I can say. I thought the story was great and I hope you write more clichés like it. Meghan- Reviewers_Found
Mad for Figs 2007-06-09 ch 1,	abuseSorry for the late[r] review. Anyway, wow. At first when I saw you going into Blaire's point of view, I was sort of weary about it. But then, I realized... whoa. Huge impact at the end, when we actually got to see, as readers, what he truly said. I have to say, that was quite amazing. And a very good take on the SKoW challenge! I'll give you props for that. :D Probably the better ones of #8 I've seen. I look forward to reading your other writings. Oh, and a suggestion. When you switched point of views, I got really confused. I thought they were Berlin's thoughts at first, maybe you could do something about that? Make it a bit more distinct? Anyway, that's just my opinion. Good luck in the future. :D
The Latest Plague 2007-06-09 ch 1,	abuseomg, this was good. i really enjoyed it.

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