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| KaiMeiHime 2008-05-11 ch 4, | PLEASE update SOON! this has a really good and complicated storyline, so far it's sounds really good and i don't like being left in suspense :( :( ha ha XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Vesta J 2007-08-25 ch 4, | DROWNEDDENIAL! DROWNEDENIAL! no! this hasn't been updated since june, and i am DYING here! no! you're gonna update fast, right? i mean, i'm hanging on a thread here! i shall not forgive you for having such short chapters! this--this--INSOLENCE will NOT be tolerated! [i sound like some cranky teacher, don't i? T_T] so, as i am hoping, you will DISCONTINUE your...disturbing habit of not updating faster and writing much less than before. i WILL report you to the UAATC if you do not comply with my orders! you hear? ORDERSS! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! [if you find me scary, feel free to tell me to stop] mwahahahahahaha! mwahahahahahahaha-HA! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! [as i realized in my previous review, stupid FP decides to take off unnecessary, unneeded, EXTRA (pfftt..like they know anything) characters (as in typing letters characters) so all my EVIL laughter may be cut short, quite unfortunately =(] so, the suspense and lack of more information is killing me!! i mean, you've provided enough to keep the reader hanging *sound familiar vesta?* *oh yeah.* *now stop talking to yourself vesta* *stfu* *excuse me?* *nothing.* *righhtt* -vesta [cue evil cackle] MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA~! |
| Vesta J 2007-08-25 ch 3, | purple hair? swet ;) lol this is pure awesomeness! i mean, i gotta give you 100,0,0,0,0,0 (i don't even know that number T_T)x credit for capturing my interest!! i mean, really. it's hard for me to pay attention to detail, and i always end up missing it anyway. and poor neil!! give him his eyesight back, dammit!! you mean, CRUEL author!! i shall report you to the UAATC*! they will confine you in your padded cell, where you will be kept away from all pointy things, ESPCIALLY the might pencil, or even pen, so you will not i repeat, NOT do your characters any harm! they ARE alive you know... in insane girls' heads like me... -vesta *Unauthorized Authors Abusing Their Children |
| Vesta J 2007-08-25 ch 2, | no,no, you didn'y scare me off :P i think i took this off my story alert...i guess the title didn't ring a bell or anythin, but i was just going through my favs list, and saw this again ^^ the descriptions and detail in this chapter are AMAZING. just needed to let you know that :D it's okay if nothing much happened, it'll progress later, right? well, this chappe was really intriguing, and instead of only reviewing your 4th chapter, i'm going to r&r all three left :) -vesta |
| xanthofile 2007-06-21 ch 4, | i like that, an exchange was made. i think that whole situation is enough to satisfy me for a while. too bad i was never brilliant enough to think of an idea like that to use for my own writing. *laughs* thanks for answering questions! i don't think i could click on this update link quite fast enough. ^^ |
| xanthofile 2007-06-18 ch 3, | that did answer some of my questions, while raising quite a few good ones. ^^ now i'm all psyched to read more, and i want to shake neil and tell him to get with it, but that's just me. lol i have a very low patience tolerance. as my brother could testify to. heh. THE game, huh? sounds...interesting. i'll be waiting for the next chapter, yes i will. |
| Shizuka no Namida 2007-06-09 ch 3, | Oh, a very lovely cliffhanger you just left us with, love. So you will eventually explain the Tyro Keeper stuff, as you implied? And will Neil get his eyesight back, or is going to need some serious coke bottle glasses to compensate? Because I can just see him doing something incredibly stupid/dangerous while in his World o' Bluriness. Hey, at least your hair came out blue! Mine came out green, and still is, even though it was supposed to wash out two weeks ago. |
| xanthofile 2007-06-06 ch 2, | ah yes, i meant to review this before but my internet was spazzing on me at that point, so i forgot that i saved it to try again. anyways, all cockmockery aside: the first chapter was normal, and then the second was like a dream! and i loved that aspect of this. it raises a lot more questions than were even hinted at being answered, and that normally drives me nuts, but i think my curiosity is just too hooked for me to care overmuch. so yeah...i'll be waiting to see what this game is, and about the shadow-neil. |
| Shizuka no Namida 2007-06-01 ch 2, | Wow. I really like the last half of this chapter. Somewhat vague, but really amazing. |
| Kailum 2007-05-28 ch 1, | wowowow. This sounds so cool. I love your introduction! It's a lot more descriptive than most of the stories on fictionpress, and I like the change ^_^ It's like I'm actually reading a real novel :P But wow. dramaticnes?? I can't wait to see what happens! |
| Vesta J 2007-05-28 ch 1, | Very interesting. I like this Neil guy. Also, I want to known what happens next! Haha, yes I will annoy you. I don't know about you, but I get really happy when people leave reviews for me, and trust me, I haven't got many. So here, please keep updating! |