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| VioletSkye-x 2008-10-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow, i really like this =] |
| Dannika 2008-08-01 ch 13, anon. | abuseI actually like Kedyn!! I know what he's going through, and sure he's unsure right now, about her, but it's obvious they're gonna hook up!! Just, please don't put her with those two pups or with Ruric, (whatevr his name is) :) Thanks! Dannika, Ps. You're a good writer! |
| santi518 2008-07-15 ch 13, | abuseI love this story. It's great! I especially like the last line of this chapter: "Trading one cage for another." It intrigues me in some way...the simplicity and "duh-factor" (for lack of a better word) of it all? I dunno. Keep up the fantastic work! |
| Meg 2008-06-24 ch 13, anon. | abuseseriously Kedyn should die, i hate him. It seems like you want to write them together but at the same time you don't...i hope its don't. lol I feel like she should escape and kill of kedyn and then take another mate lol even warewolves should have free will! |
| naokoangel01 2008-06-20 ch 13, | abuseWow! I just love this! Please continue I cant wait to read the next chapter and many more to come I hope :D |
| jess 2008-03-09 ch 13, anon. | abusewow it's been awhile |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-03-09 ch 13, | abusei luv ur story so far, so keep updating1 |
| Ck90 2008-01-05 ch 13, | abusePoor Kedyn, i feel bad for him. It must be frustrating wanting to be with that person and not being acknoweledged, but then again some men never know the right way of approaching the object of their afrection. Does she now anything about mates at all? She must have seen it n the wolf pack right? U€pdate Soon! |
| sousie 2007-12-29 ch 13, | abuseupdate soon it's really awsome |
| Victoriana 2007-12-28 ch 13, | abuseThis is really interesting! I hope to see more soon! |
| aferdeity 2007-12-28 ch 13, | abusewow. he finally does something nice and it... isn't. I have to say I know he is supposed to be an insensitive alpha wolf, but this guy takes it to a new level. I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't take a million years this time. |
| Noctame 2007-12-28 ch 13, | abuseroflmao... |
| jammi 2007-12-28 ch 13, | abusewell, in stories I find that people tend to make wolves the bad guy or crazy or something, makes no sense to me lol. Poor Rayne, always getting locked up when for the majority of her life she's been running free. One thing though, she was turned when she was twelve right? She speaks her age though, which I think is extremely contradictory since there was no way for her vocabulary to expand, even if she was a precocious child it doesn't really make sense. Especially if she gave herself over to the wolf side. |
| Ashenwisp 2007-12-28 ch 13, | abuseI love this series! You are an amazing authoress! Please update more often, as you've gotten me hooked! Thank you for writing!:D |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-12-28 ch 13, | abuseI love this story! WHy did the pups have to do that I was really starting to like them?! UPDATE! THIS IS AWSOME>. |