God this was adorable.

I love your writing style :D and great character development. You seem to be good at that within one shots! Haha :D

I loved it.

Holy **, was that sad or what!
D; Honestly, it wasn't that corny.
But it was really well-written and genius, baby!

Beautiful. :)

Beautiful story!


xx

Very sweet story. The ending made me want to cry.

This made me so sad...but it really was beautiful and touching.

"I still Love her."
--That line especially broke my heart...

You did such an amazing job with this one. :)

You suck. I loved it, but you SUCK. It was amazing, but you suck. I cried and you suck.

awhh. tragic..yes cheesy but lovely...
i don't know what i am feeling right now.
this is how i would really feel when some big character dies.. just like this book i read "A message in a bottle" by nicholas sparks.
tsk.
it feel so terrible..

nice. ^^

oh
that's so sad
but i liked it
a lot
and i feel like i should cry or something
but i did like it - love it
its a sweet story
i still feel like i should cry
good job!

izzie

its sweet, :D oh and 26th july is my birthday, wowh. hahaha

How incredibly sad. Beautiful though...and yes, slightly cheesy. But, still. I adored Jeremiah. He's amusing and annoying and a very fun character.

This story is a definite favorite. I'm so glad that I found it.

CHEERS!
~Jeni

It's a bit cheesy, but it's not bad. I've read worse. no, just kidding. it's nice. Haha. :D no, seriously, it's sweet. But the last part is sad.

Oh. My. God. That was so...awesome! Okay, it was a little cheesy, (xD) but hey, It was ADORABLE! And seriously, I started tearing up at the end. Yes, like, CRYING tearing up.

That was so sweet and the end was really sad. Well I mean, it was happy, but it was sad, and...

Ok yeah I have no idea where I'm going with this review. Anyway. It was great! Kudos for that. I loved it! :]

And you know what? I think you've earned a spot on my favorite authors list. WOOHOO! Jump for joy...xD

Blah.

-kyllex

so... did she like, Die?
`cause if she did, i might have to cry..
If not, Good Story!! (even if she did though)
XxCrossMyHeartxX

I cried. That was so sad. But good at the same time and sweet.

Love,
Becca

haha very sweet

I gotta admit, that's my philosophy too. If I can't end a story, I kill the character and make it a tragic, emotional, dramatic ending. But it's weird, I can write tragic stories but I can never read other people's tragedies. It makes me too sad haha.

~Arista