Another touching poem!

Sammy B.

This is great, I can relate. Hey that rhymed!

can totally relate to this one.

kudos.

srz

Definitely something I can relate with, which I thought you described here pretty well. While I didn't quite get the flow/rhythm of this (that's just me), I thought you brought across your emotions here very well. Good work.

Honestly, I understand it. This poem is something I would have never thought of, I love it's uniqueness. Very well written, excellent job!

i can so relate to this... its great =]

What am I? chopped liver? I AM YOUR FRIEND!
wait you wrote this before you met me...
any ways, i guess your my friend.

your fellow writer, moosie

Loved the poem and I hate cliques
evilangelkitty~jesse

haha i hate cliques

Sorry, you have to go throw that ordeal.

I fell the same way.

I have this mental problem that makes me fear other people.


Don't take me as a crazy person.

You can always talk to me if, you want.

I really like this!! I think everyone feels like this at some point, I know I have.

This piece of writing is well put together. I believe that this truly captures the essence of what many people feel today yet do not express. To try and fit in and be one of the crowd is not the easiest thing to do. Many people have tons of acquaintances and I believe that few are truly lucky enough to have a true friend. Friends are like diamonds in the rough, truly valuable and very hard to come by. Your final stanza shows some interesting thoughts. Many people sit and suffer in silence while the world passes them by, ignorant to their inner torment and suffering. Who can you talk to? Who can you trust? As to the first question, therein lies the beauty of the anonyminity of the internet, as for who can you trust, well, I am afraid that I don't think that their can be any true answer to that. Well written. Keep it up. Hope this review made sense.

Cheers
Lost in A World of Pain

eh cliques suck, don't they? i loved this poem though, great work!