hi!
i like this very much actually i love it its happens but dont forget keep smiling and i know you liked moi friends poem and she loved it so if ya could sometime r&r some of moi peoms that be GREAT! anyways keep smiling love TeArS oF tHe HeArT

"and my heart bleeds darkness
life flows thru my veins crimson and warm
with the blade of vengeance I release it"
"my soul longs to b
plastered in the pages
to be a part of the grace desire life"
I swear, I love your choice of words. Your writing has a nice flow it. I'm anxious to read more of your poems! :D