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Reviews For: Death of inocence

Midnight-Maddness
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseOMG! Those poor caterpillars! I love caterpillars

This poem is beautiful, it truely is

well done

M-M93
darkwolf486
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseI like this poem. I'm not entire sure why. I don't know if it's because, to me, it shows an innocent person's hopes being washed away from them or if it's because sin is something nobody can hide from. Very good!
hey maria
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abuseomg dat is so so sadd, how dare dey do dat to poor lil catturpillerz?? i agree, treez r pointless plus dere ugly
Maisha Mafuriko
2007-05-28
ch 1,
abuseThis writing you have penned really gives folks to consider exactly how are we treating or in this case...mistreating the life of creatures so innocent indeed.

Oh to be a litle caturpilar in your watchful abiding care would be one to know treasured love.
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