Great poem. I like the sentiment that we're all connected and sometimes we're alone even though we're surrounded by a bunch of people.

Twilight Starr

i really like this - its orignal and well written despite your said 'writer's block'! i like the bit about the eyes 'polluted with sadness' and 'leaves me gasping for air', though they are not orignal feelings you've made them so becuase of the owrds you've chosen. well done! :)

Whoosh. Blow in the guts. Wow. Second stanza - words cannot describe...you utter genius!

nice one... i like how you use the bold, underline and italisize tools A LOT- dont worry- its very good and i wish i had more current inspiration cause i dont. :(

For having writer's block this is really well-written. The end was probably my favorite part. I know how it feels having no inspiration, or having all the inspiration in the world and feeling drained of talant. Either one, it just sucks. This was great though. Wonderful job.