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| Melanie Layugan 2007-05-29 ch 1,   | Short and sharp. Keep it up. Melanie |
| flies.like.decay. 2007-05-28 ch 1, | Was there a rhyme scheme to this? I couldn't tell. And by the way, the line "That have been poring down" has a typo in it. It should be pouring. But with as much experience with typos I have, I won't stress it much. |
| say this sooner 2007-05-28 ch 1, | nice. i love the last line. great work. |
| Vesta J 2007-05-28 ch 1, | Very nicely written. :] poring, should be pouring, though. Sorry, I'm just kind of big on spelling. o.O haha |