 Mirabella 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Nicely done.
Quite an image in the first line. |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-31 . chapter 1I love the middle line... the fields on fire, but tis the nations that are burning.. the ending also has a very true and important message... great job |
 Twilight Starr 2008-01-10 . chapter 1Good poem. I don't believe we should blame the soldiers either. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 SquirtleKelly 2007-09-22 . chapter 1I like the last line.
But maybe don't use 'burn' twice-in a haiku it seems very obvious. |
 Simultaneous Tick-Tocks 2007-07-10 . chapter 1Hm. Nice imagery. I feel bad for those who have to partake in such things.
~tick-tock |
 continuous brevity 2007-05-28 . chapter 1very dark and mysterious. i like it :] nice work! |
 cmetalangel249 2007-05-28 . chapter 1Its short, but I like it. It sums it all up nicely, sort of a 'don't shoot the messenger' deal. |