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Mirabella 2009-07-31 . chapter 1
Nicely done.
Quite an image in the first line.
simpleplan13 2008-01-31 . chapter 1
I love the middle line... the fields on fire, but tis the nations that are burning.. the ending also has a very true and important message... great job
Twilight Starr 2008-01-10 . chapter 1
Good poem. I don't believe we should blame the soldiers either. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
SquirtleKelly 2007-09-22 . chapter 1
I like the last line.
But maybe don't use 'burn' twice-in a haiku it seems very obvious.
Simultaneous Tick-Tocks 2007-07-10 . chapter 1
Hm. Nice imagery. I feel bad for those who have to partake in such things.

~tick-tock
continuous brevity 2007-05-28 . chapter 1
very dark and mysterious. i like it :] nice work!
cmetalangel249 2007-05-28 . chapter 1
Its short, but I like it. It sums it all up nicely, sort of a 'don't shoot the messenger' deal.
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