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| bookworm-lovingedward 2008-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseomg, I rly liked it, fun 2 read in car while drivin, lol |
| Evelei 2008-07-07 ch 38, | abuseo.O Story was awesome, and the characters you created were great.. But.. >.< What the hell kind of ending is that!?!?! *sigh* XD But it was all great anyhow. |
| Emily Autumn 2008-05-22 ch 38, | abuseThis was really, really good. Seriously. I was bawling by the second to last chapter...my eyes are still slightly watering. This was so, so good. You are an amazing author...this should be made into a book and published! Looking for more stories by you... |
| Nikki 2008-04-23 ch 8, anon. | abuseAiden is really annoying. And not in a clever way. |
| Somniorum 2008-03-08 ch 38, | abuseYour story is merely beautiful. There's no other words I can use to describe how much it touched me. |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-03-01 ch 38, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this! It was so dramatic XD Kind of a depressing ending, but it worked. Great job! |
| PindrakeCake 2008-01-30 ch 38, | abuseOh wow, that was REALLY good. Loved it. |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 38, | abuseI don't know how you do it but you always end this perfectly. |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 37, | abusegod damn you! It brought a tear to my eye :'( |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 36, | abusegah these are really short... |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 35, | abuseVery short chapter... |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 34, | abuseLove the ending to this chapter. |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 33, | abuseI really don't know where all of this is heading and if it had a point in the end. |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 32, | abusegood chapter. I have ti disagree with you on your commenst about the last few being weak, they just had a few weak spots along the way. |
| Americanpieflute 2008-01-15 ch 31, | abuseI can so see where this is going... |