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| Imalefty 2007-09-30 ch 1,   | it is quite hazy, and i have no idea what it means. but i can feel the emotion in these words, and i suppose that's what counts. :) as for concrit... there isn't really any i can give. (well, mostly since it's a poem and poems can be whatever you want them to be. XD) i thought it was quite good - you made it short enough so that it didn't get boring and long enough so that you could describe what was going on. good job! keep writing! -Lefty ps: thanks for reviewing "princess" - i really appreciate it. i'm sorry about the party... =\ anyway, glad you liked it! |