Reviews for Wicked - FictionPress.com

Reviews For: Wicked

MidnightThief15 2007-10-17 ch 2,	abuseI like your story, but I like the prologue better than the first chapter. Chapter 1 is about a completely different person than the prologue. It's a little confusing.
Simple Thoughts 2007-09-16 ch 2,	abuseThis is a very interesting story, however, you do have alot of spelling mistakes. If you re-read your work you should be able to catch them, if not you should find a beta. Oh, and I have the same birthday as you, just not the same year. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Mylime 2007-08-26 ch 2,	abuseAn update! I like this chapter almost as much as the prologue. You seem to have a knack for believable characters and dialogue, and I love all of the little details; they make the story more real. As for the actual content of the chapter...very grim. Interesting, but grim. I can't wait to see how it develops.
SamanthaNicole 2007-08-25 ch 1,	abuseYou are truly an incredible writer. I loved everything about this. It was interesting, it was beautifully written, and the style was impeccable. I particularly loved the end, when he's beating the girl with the belt - not because I'm a sadist, haha, but because you described it so well that I could actually picture it. This was fantastic. Good for you. I'll definitely be back for more. Cheers, Sammy
Twilight Starr 2007-08-20 ch 2,	abuseGood chapter. It gives a glimpse into your character's background. So does she go on to get revenge against her father because the policeman planted it there? Please update soon. ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-08-20 ch 1,	abuseGood, well written prolouge. I feel sorry for your main character. ~Twilight Starr~
Kami 2007-08-12 ch 2, anon.	abusei like how the the writing styles switched. in the first one, Tory sounds like a bonafidde Southern-belle, while this chapter is more subdued. wicked chapter! XD
Fictionette 2007-08-10 ch 2,	abuseWow . . . Olisa Whitefield seems like a clever child...with some twisted intentions lacing around her mind. Like it!
Mylime 2007-08-07 ch 1,	abuseWow...this is truly a story of cruelty and the darker side of religious conviction. It reminds me somewhat of the antagonist in Chocolat, or the preacher in The Poisonwood Bible. I really liked the voice that you used for this story; it fit the main character well. The characters are frightening, but believable, and your description and imagery was very strong. Great work! I would like to ask why the whole thing is in italics, though.
AluminumMuse 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseWow, really lovely. I hate leaving pointless reviews, but that was just fabulous. A few minor points: As a general rule, don't say 'you' in writing, not even in first person. When I awoke, it was dark and it seemed a fire burned in me -- You don't have to use 'seemed' here, it only weakens the sentence. Yeah, that's all I can think of. Great job. Feather La
Decrynx 2007-06-01 ch 1,	abuseThe category "angst" for this places it too shallow. That description is too light. Simply this chapter, this start, is too powerful for such a thin nutshell. Obviously, if you couldn't tell, I liked it. Who could do otherwise? Starting it off so captivatingly will have me on the watch for the chapters to come, to the end.
A Wandering Thought 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseclaps Wonderful, wonderful prologue. Darkly descriptive. I can't wait to read more.
Raico 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good! I love the descriptions and word choice as well as the characters and the emotions conveyed. I hope to be reading more! -Raico
Kami 2007-05-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like the quiet imaegry in this work. It has a certain South-ern quality to it. Thiss was a beauitful job.
Luke78 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseAll I can say is wow. This story is fantastically written. The small details, the descriptive style, nothing short of amazing. I look forward to future installments!

Return to Top