Aw, very sweet. I loved it!

really sweet and perfect. very unique.

it's amazing and pure. is this one of ur fantasies? do u wish that this would happen to u??

loved it.

i would really be grateful if u read some of my poems! thanks and keep on writing!

aww that was so adorable. =D. liked it a lot.

I LOVE IT! Simply but artfully written, shows the KISS principle works. I want a Shane now. You showed his emotions very well! Just a question, are they in high school or college? I couldn't quite figure out.

WOW! WOW! WOW!