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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2008-06-02 ch 1,   | Very pretty imagery. I especially enjoyed the last stanza of this poem. Very nice play on music. "diry in the day's soil" was a nice added touch to this and played off the layman's comparison to the musician. Nice how simplicity can still be beautiful. Nice touch! |
| Tytherpol 2007-05-29 ch 1, | i'd personally 86 the last line, but it's a pretty cool poem otherwise. |