Reviews for I Wrote a Name to the Sand

none of burt's beeswax 2007-07-11 ch 1,	abuseich, this is painful. that gloating girl is so obilvious, it's almost more painful for me since the narrator is triumphant in a way by releasing her hold on him. and she has no idea. mmhhmm, i like it.
Vesta J 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThought of when you were drunk, haha. It has a good flow.