Amazing.

I wish I could leave a lengthier review, but that's all I can really say.

'Though to breathe is death alive'- I love it. I love the last stanza and line. . . I love all of it. Love is a strong word, but I think it may just fit this poem. It's imagery is strong, pleasantly surreal. . .

That was great...I loved your word choice! I wish that song had music to it so that I could hear it! It was really good!