Reviews for Walk With Me, My Love

Megami Chibi 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseabsolutely beautiful. It portrays a really sweet and tender love, with promise of more to come. Maranwe, you really are my favorite author, next to my sister. You two tie for the lead ;P
hey maria 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseVery stunning imagery.
DarkBlysse 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseFirst off, I love the pattern of formatting you've got going here. It's very pretty and adds a lot of emphasis to the poem. ...I don't know if this was intentional, but I noticed that every other mention of your love was 'love' and the other alternating one was 'my love'. It was 'love'...'my love'...'love'...etc all throughout the poem. I liked that patterning. ...yeah, I know it's probably odd that I noticed such a small detail. But I really pay attention to the things I read. "Songs of Faeries gae"--'Gae'? I'm lost there. O.o It's a prety line--but you lost me at 'gae.' Oh, I love how you described the butterfly, what with it being a kiss on colored wings and such. Very beautiful and quite original, I think. Wow. This was a wonderful poem and a pleasure to read! This definitely goes into my faves!