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Reviews For: All Who Hear May Nothing See

Megami Chibi
2007-08-05
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abuseI have to agree with one of your other reviewers, it is nonsensical a bit perhaps, but it does provoke deep thought, and many of the verses ring true when taken in pairs or by themselves.
Zane Richardson Waya Wolf
2007-07-09
ch 1,
abuseVery good, though you say its not got a deep meaning it provokes deep thought :P which for one such as myself is quite a feat ^^
diesoz
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseI'm glad that you added the note about it being nonsensical, becasue I did like it, but ti didn't make much sense overall. lol Althought I really liked the way you used the last word of the previous line as the first word of the next line. it created a very nice rhythm.
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