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| Megami Chibi 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI have to agree with one of your other reviewers, it is nonsensical a bit perhaps, but it does provoke deep thought, and many of the verses ring true when taken in pairs or by themselves. |
| Zane Richardson Waya Wolf 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseVery good, though you say its not got a deep meaning it provokes deep thought :P which for one such as myself is quite a feat ^^ |
| diesoz 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad that you added the note about it being nonsensical, becasue I did like it, but ti didn't make much sense overall. lol Althought I really liked the way you used the last word of the previous line as the first word of the next line. it created a very nice rhythm. |